RetroMonkey's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[AF: The Insane Quiz]

The idea...

...was good. But, the cheapness of the drawings, even though funny in terms of core idea, were not polished enough to make the quiz feel all that professional if you know what I mean. If they were what they were, but lines were straighter and there was color on at least some, then I'm pretty sure it would pass the portal if it doesn't this time.

jonohomo responds:

cheers

[Tiny Sheep - demo]

HILARIOUS!

That was really funny! BOOOOooOOOoooOOOM! -ahem- You were on to something, just really unpolished. the shots from the enemy sheep were too unpredictable, and it's too trial-and-error, and not as much of a test of skill, like games are normally good as. Maybe a LITTLE bit of trial-and-error in a game, but that game...was just too much.

Chuckntif responds:

thanks for help

i'll add easier ennemies for future versions

here're tricks for floor ennemies:
-if you stand on the same platform they shoot
-walking sheeps don't shoot immediately and have a stupid behavior, jump to not stay too long on floor, manage to stand behind them
-non walking sheeps shoot immediately, u gotta find the good strategy to kill them, depending on environement (jump from strategic height / use explosives / let'em live...)

[Retro Tank]

I dunno...

Almost good, I guess. Deep within it is a good retro-style flash game, but it can't come out because it's just a bit too unpolished. Shooting things coming at you and/or shooting at you while jumping, shooting, and EVEN USING THE PLATFORMS AS COVER is a good concept, but the guys on the ground come at you too fast, and that makes it feel kind of random rather than simply an enemy that comes at you. It's just kind of unorganized, if you know what I mean. More like your being bombarded than having enemies come at you, if you know what I mean. Try to fix it up if the game doesn't make it past the portal, and make sure to use my advice. I'd like to see a fixed up version, honestly.

azeronhans responds:

thanks for the feedback, it's people like you who get the world in order :) those are all great suggestions I plan on doing alot of updates

[Multi-Sphere]

Nice JaWb!

I don't know if this is your first game, or maybe even one of your first games, but if it is then that's spectacular! Great work on your level. It's a bery good idea, though I agree with some of the people here that it could of had maybe a background or something, but it's done well! I think you have a good future in Flash ahead of you if you keep going.

TrippyWhale responds:

thanks man, really appreciate it